Thanks for the positive feedback! I do have another if you would permit me to, although thisis rather a sad one I hope you are able to finish it and let me know what you think!
Sad Cows and sheep.
Sad cows and sheep,
Oh! how they weep,
death greeting them in the morn,
as the sky breaks into dawn,
the abbatoir engines fire,
they call the farmer a liar,
what about those grassy fields,
and those crops you have to yield,
the sun does rise,
high in the skies,
and allows the world to see,
the true horror of thee,
eating meat is surely wrong,
veggies and oatmeal make me strong,
I beg all you carnivores,
stpo it and do more,
to prevent the cow and the sheep,
from even beginning to weep.
I'm to choked to write more will be in touch,
McSpotlight: The Creative Room is probably the best place to post poetry...;)