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the errors of your ways

Posted by: McMilitants ( M.A.M, Third Fleet, Solaris Sector, Earth ) on December 02, 1998 at 14:51:45:

In Reply to: colon cancer & death on a bun posted by Kristin on November 24, 1998 at 01:10:46:

K: She used to be a grazing beauty,
proud and standing tall.
Now she is a greasy stain
upon Mcdonalds wall.

cy bing: They took away her son
they processed her daughter,
tell me, anyone,
will we ever end the slaughter?

Cynic: Alas, I fear not anytime soon,
And my hunger makes me say so.
She suits me better on a bun
With pickles, lettuce, and tomato.

K: When you're done your feasting,
your battle has begun
as colon cancer wars within
the death upon your bun.

M: And so we warn you Cynic,
to the errors of your ways,
don't gorge yourself McDonalds style,
the pain will last for days.


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